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December 08, 2009

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Tom B and Siobhan W

This is good work but L'apreis is spelt L'aprés. Well done that you have included an opinion but next time try and include a more than one tense to get a higher grade. the current grade is a D but if you correct the mistakes, include tenses and add some more words to get a C/B.

liam

a good understandable piece of work. YOu clearly understand times of the day. Good use of opinions

Target.
- Wirte more word ( 130 - 150 )
- Use more than 1 tense.. je voudrais.

Jess

THIS IS A GOOD PIECE OF WORK AND WELL EXPLAINED WITH VERY GOOD OPINIONS BUT MAYBE YOU COULD MAKE IT LONGER AND ADD MORE DETAIL :D:D

Daniel Haywood

the work is good but the only adjective you have used is intresting. you could use an other adjective such as magnificent.
try to include more word and talk about more things giving you a chance to use better and a more wide range of vocabulary.

Keep up the good work :)

James Lamond

good work max try to use more opinions for example je horreur. also use more adjctives more than intresting.

try to write more and use better vocabulary.

lornaaaa

this is a good piece of work. try and make it abit longer because then you will move up in the grades. try and use more complex connectives and opinions :)

James

very good, well explained work.
your objective is to write more and add more detail to your work.

Danielle

welldone max, you used some good opinions but you need to show reasons :)

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