Mon diner
Premièrement, j`ai mangé. Le dimanche diner. J`ai adoré le poulet et c`était délicieux avec les pommes de terre rôties qui sont fantastiques. Mon préféré est la purée. Cependant je déteste le brocoli. Je trouve ca` plutôt nul. J`ai bu de orange juice. Je trouve` ca vraiment incroyablement. Finalement mon diner j`ai été formidable.
very good.
Posted by: callum | February 20, 2012 at 12:02 PM
very good paragraph has 3 tenses but could be longer
Posted by: josh | February 20, 2012 at 11:52 AM
*:includes 3 tenses
*:accurate grammar
w:make the paragraph longer
Posted by: charlesworth | February 20, 2012 at 11:48 AM
well done danny includes all 3 tenses :P
Posted by: john | February 20, 2012 at 11:41 AM
well done great work has 3 tenses better than mine
Posted by: kyle | February 20, 2012 at 11:37 AM