Pour comencer j’ai mangè spaghetti avec mais doux et c’ètait delicieux. Nèanmoins le cola gôuter mieux et refraîchissanh.
Après avoir bu ,j’ai mangè des poulet avec rotîr pommè de terre et je penceque le poulet on cru caril on cru j’ai devenir malade.Doncje n’aime pas poulet.
Demain je vais mangè poulet refaire parce que des dimache.
very good it is a big paragraph.
Posted by: callum | February 20, 2012 at 12:00 PM
well done very good paragraph
Posted by: josh | February 20, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Very good work abi!! aleast a grace C !!
Posted by: aimee :3 | February 20, 2012 at 11:48 AM
go on abi! you bossed this paragraph with a grade C paragraph! you could include more complex sentences though... :)
Posted by: charlesworth | February 20, 2012 at 11:43 AM
well done abi! its alot better than mine! include's all 3 tenses.... :)
Posted by: john | February 20, 2012 at 11:40 AM
very good youve got 3 tenses you will get a grade c.
Posted by: kyle | February 20, 2012 at 11:33 AM
Good use of adjectives and past tense.
Posted by: Daniel Haupt | February 20, 2012 at 11:33 AM
this good! THE END!
Posted by: Ryan :) | February 20, 2012 at 11:32 AM